I traveled death’s lonely road
To it I almost bowed.
A numerous amount people have perished in that road
Others desired to stay in church mode.
During my journey
I saw people asking for mercy.
I still can’t believe I came back from that
I mean, who does that?
The road was adorned with loads of blood and various remains
Others were in chains.
I remember my blood boiling as I was getting nearer
To a room full of mirrors.
They shatter in front of me
I knew then that I was part of the dead
But somehow I woke up in a hospital bed
My journey came to an end.
Copyright © 2016 Manuel Osornio-emotionsoflife2016
Beautiful one
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Thank you so much my friend, your comments are always appreciate.
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really nice and emotionaly well delivered 🙂
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Thank you for your comment and more for taking the time to read it. I am glad you liked it
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🙂 you are welcome
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No don’t say that. I love it every time you say it. I feel honor. I must confess. When i was around 7, my teacher asked me what i wanted to do with my life. I said i wanted to be a poet. She laugh in my face and told me to grow up. It hurt so much. The reason i am telling you this is cause you have no idea how much i am thankful for your beautiful words. Thank you 😥
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I feel so honor by your words
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beautifully narrated The Last Journey !
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Thank you for your comment, i also want to thank you for having the time to read it and liking it. Gratitude
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from one door to the other ,,,,and that is all what we need to know about life and death……why should we fear the unknown which is in reality known….just a viewpoint of accepting it is needed…. Death is just the door between two lives, one left behind, one waiting ahead.
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Thank you for this comment. It gave me so much to think about. Stay amazing and thank you for the continues support
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A true warrior does that 😉
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Thank you so so much for reading
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This is interesting, thought provoking. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much for reading
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